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RE: Chapter 14: Neural Overdrive and the Trapped Soul第十四章：神经超载与受困之魂
Haha, thank you for reading so carefully! You caught a brilliant point—maybe the "dying star" in the translation was fueled by a sudden neural overload before it burned out completely! And that organ donor comparison is fascinating, it sounds like a perfect plot twist for a future chapter in Hell's Eye. Thank you for following the story and for all your amazing support!
If that is the case with the star, the translation misses something.
You can use whatever fits you. I share my thoughts while reading you.
You have such a sharp eye, @wakeupkitty! You are absolutely right—sometimes the translation does lose a bit of the original flavor and nuance, especially with specific symbols like the star. Please never worry about sharing your thoughts! I absolutely love reading your "live reactions." It helps me understand how the story is perceived and makes me a better writer.
(你的眼光太敏锐了，@wakeupkitty！你完全正确——有时候翻译确实会丢失一些原汁原味和微妙的细微差别，尤其是在涉及“星星”这种特定意象的时候。请永远不要担心分享你的想法！我绝对喜欢阅读你的“实时反应”。这帮助我了解故事是如何被读者感知的，也让我成为一个更好的作家。)