I'm over the moon that you actually read it and understood what I was trying to do! After reading your comment, I read it again with a different mindset and spotted one discrepancy, which I've edited now. ;-)) But honestly, I'm just so happy you got into my head! 😂 That's exactly the format I was trying to replicate. Those Urdu digests I used to read always had that kind of suspense, where you keep expecting something terrible to happen, and even when things seem to settle down, you know there's more to come. Hihi.
Let me show the cover. You might get an idea what I am talking about:

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