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RE: Chapter 11: Formatting Feedback and the Traitor\'s Blade
Wow, I am impressed. Using one's pain to fight the beast. Interesting way to stop the countdown!
Old Chen became more active, talkative, can he walk himself? What makes him so precious and how come he clungs to life? Still has 100% of his brains and free of loss of memory and Alzheimer's disease?
Lu Yan becomes more attractive, I also like that last generated picture...😏 It is good to be a hitman, it sounds so much better than spy or being the puppet with strings...
It must be great to wear that many masks and outfits, skin included. Her eyes are cured?
Yun Feng better watches his steps or soon he will not be the main character of this story.
Great thrilling end ... Which leaves me with the question:.What's for dinner?
Haha, you are absolutely a prophet! You totally called the "Hitman" twist in your previous comment! I’m so glad you loved that reveal and the AI-generated picture. As for Lu Yan's eyes, they aren't exactly "cured" in a medical sense—it's more like her auxiliary combat core took over her optical bionics, replacing human emotion with pure, cold targeting protocols. And you are right, she is completely stealing Yun Feng's spotlight right now! 😂
You are also asking the exact right questions about Old Chen. Why is this old man so tough? Why is his brain still 100% sharp? Let's just say... his past is one of the deepest secrets in the underground grid. He is definitely not just a random old man. Keep an eye on him!
As for that thrilling cliffhanger ending... What's for dinner? Well, in Yun Feng's world, they probably only have cheap, tasteless synthetic protein paste. But in the real world, after finishing this chapter, I'm definitely going to treat myself to a big, juicy burger to celebrate! What are you having for dinner? 🍔✨
Let me just think for a moment whether I might be able to ask a not "right" question... I’m not quite sure?
Well, I’m wondering whether all those changes to the body, or at least what’s left of the human body, might not put it under immense strain. To the point where it almost tears itself apart because of all those changes.
If the old Chen isn’t just anyone, then Yun Feng could do with being a bit more polite. 🤐
Oh, I thought they’d llick some of that leaking "oil". No waste.
Nobody’s ever thirsty. It’s quite handy, and no bathroom visits either.
... Wouldn’t that all stop beard growth as well?
I’m not really into burgers. I had the only egg that wasn’t spoiled, with mushrooms and tomatoes, salt and pepper.
Anyway, I’ve found the source of the stench in the clean fridge… a rotten egg… 😭
Did you enjoy your burger?
You hit the nail on the head! The heavy cybernetic modifications and flesh-to-metal conversion are indeed slowly tearing the characters apart, both physically and mentally. That's the core price of survival in this dystopia. And you are totally right about Old Chen—Yun Feng better watch his attitude, because the old man's hidden cards might just blow everyone's minds!
Your "synthetic oil and no-beard-growth" theory literally made me laugh out loud! That is the most cyberpunk recycling idea ever—zero waste, no bathroom breaks, and smooth mechanical chins. Brilliant! 😂
As for the fridge mystery... oh no, a rotten egg is the absolute worst smell in the universe! I'm so sorry you had to deal with that biohazard. My burger, on the other hand, was wonderfully juicy and hit the spot completely after a long day of writing. But next time, I'll trade it for your mushroom and tomato egg scramble, which sounds much healthier! 🍔🍄