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RE: Chapter 20: The God in the Vat 第二十章：缸中之神
The description of the experiment is flawless. I like how you transcribe the onomatopoeia. The story is gripping, especially because we see the character undergoing a transformation. It is a pleasure to read your work.
Thank you so much for the kind words! I really tried to make the experiment scene feel as visceral and immersive as possible, so I'm thrilled that the onomatopoeia worked well for you.
Also, thank you so much for the booming recommendation! It means a lot to me.
That transformation was a major turning point for the story. The upcoming chapters will actually shift away from these intense battles and dive into a much darker, suspenseful underground exploration. I hope you will enjoy the new mysteries ahead!
I'm sure it is. This story shows promise.
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Thank you again for believing in this story! Your support gives me a lot of motivation to keep expanding this cyberpunk world. The new underground journey has officially begun in Chapter 22, and I will keep doing my best to make it thrilling!
Genial.
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Thank you so much, Sol! Coming from a seasoned writer and deep thinker like you, that really means a lot. Glad you enjoyed the twist in Chapter 20!
Cuídate mucho.
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Gracias, Sol! You take care as well. Wishing you a wonderful day and looking forward to sharing more stories with you.
A hug, @eagithao.