RE: Chapter 11: Formatting Feedback and the Traitor\'s Blade
You hit the nail on the head! The heavy cybernetic modifications and flesh-to-metal conversion are indeed slowly tearing the characters apart, both physically and mentally. That's the core price of survival in this dystopia. And you are totally right about Old Chen—Yun Feng better watch his attitude, because the old man's hidden cards might just blow everyone's minds!
Your "synthetic oil and no-beard-growth" theory literally made me laugh out loud! That is the most cyberpunk recycling idea ever—zero waste, no bathroom breaks, and smooth mechanical chins. Brilliant! 😂
As for the fridge mystery... oh no, a rotten egg is the absolute worst smell in the universe! I'm so sorry you had to deal with that biohazard. My burger, on the other hand, was wonderfully juicy and hit the spot completely after a long day of writing. But next time, I'll trade it for your mushroom and tomato egg scramble, which sounds much healthier! 🍔🍄