Hi @mvchacin 👋
Thank you for sharing such a well-written and well-organized post about your views on sudden death among athletes, highlighting the importance of exercising gradually and responsibly.

What’s good: I found it very interesting that the opinions you shared stem purely from your personal experience in the world of running, which makes the discussion feel authentic.

What needs improvement: I noticed that some paragraphs are too long; otherwise, it’s engaging.

How to improve it: Try breaking up the long paragraphs into shorter sections so they’re easier for readers around the world to understand.

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