The Bell Beneath Blackwater

in Dream Steem • 15 days ago

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The people of Blackwater had a strange rule.

If you heard a bell after midnight, close your windows, lock your doors, and pretend you had heard nothing.

No matter how familiar the voice calling your name sounded, never answer.

And whatever happened, never look outside.

Mara thought it was an old village superstition. She had grown up hearing stories about spirits that wandered through the woods, dead men who returned to collect their debts, and a black church beneath the lake.

She believed none of them.

Until the night her mother died.

Three nights after the burial, Mara awoke to the sound of a bell.

Dong.

She sat up.

Dong.

The sound came from beyond her window, slow and impossibly deep, as though someone were striking metal at the bottom of the earth.

Then came the voice.

Mara, darling

Her mother's voice.

Please open the door. It's cold out here.

Mara took one step towards the window, then remembered the rule.

Never answer.

Never look outside.

She backed away.

Mara, why won't you let your own mother in

A soft knock sounded against the glass. Then something dragged its fingernails down the window.

Mara covered her ears and stayed in bed until morning.

In the condensation, beneath three long scratches, she found four words:

YOUR MOTHER IS HUNGRY.

The next morning, Mara went to see the village priest, Elias.

Elias listened without interrupting. When she finished, he locked the church door and asked, “Did you look at it?”

No.

Did you answer?

No.

For the first time, the old man seemed relieved.

Good. Then it hasn't been invited in.

Invited in by what? Mara asked . Why did it sound like my mother?

Elias looked towards the lake.

The thing beneath Blackwater borrows the voices of the dead. It knows what you miss, what you regret, and what you would give anything to hear again.

What is it?

Something our ancestors made a bargain with.

Centuries earlier, a sickness had swept through the village. The survivors begged the old powers of the forest to save them.

Something answered.

It promised that no sickness would ever claim Blackwater again, provided the villagers gave it one soul every generation. Someone the village loved.

When the elders began refusing the bargain, the bell first rang. Each time, the thing beneath the lake came looking for what it was owed.

Your mother knew, Elias whispered. She spent her whole life keeping it away from you.

Mara stared at him.

Why me?

The priest did not answer.

He didn't have to.

Her mother had once told her she was born on the night the lake turned black.

That evening, Mara searched through her mother's belongings. Beneath a loose floorboard, she found a wooden box containing a silver key and a letter.

My darling Mara,

If you are reading this, then I have failed to keep the promise I made.

You were not meant to survive your birth. The thing beneath the lake had already claimed you before you took your first breath. I begged it to spare you, and it agreed on one condition: that I would take your place when my time came.

I thought death would be the end of my part in the bargain.

I was wrong.

It has learned your name.

Whatever you hear tonight, do not come looking for me.

I love you.

Mara read the letter until the words blurred.

Then the bell rang.

Once.

Twice.

Three times.

The house shook. Outside, her mother's voice cried and begged her to hurry.

Mara grabbed the silver key and ran towards the lake.

The water was perfectly still beneath the moonlight.

At its centre stood a church tower, rising from the lake as though the building beneath it had suddenly remembered how to breathe.

A narrow staircase descended into the water without getting wet.

Mara followed it.

At the bottom, she found a church filled with candles burning with black flames. At the altar stood her mother, or something wearing her mother's face.

Behind her loomed a tall figure wrapped in darkness. It had no visible face, only a mouth stretching far too wide.

You came,” it said.

Let my mother go.

Your mother is gone. What remains is the promise she made.

Then take me instead.

The creature tilted its head.

That's what I wanted you to say.

Suddenly, Mara understood. The letters, the voices, the scratches on her window, it had never needed to break into her home.

It had needed her to come willingly.

The creature extended a hand.

Step forward, child. And your mother will be free.

For one brief moment, Mara saw her mother as she truly was: frightened, exhausted, and desperately shaking her head.

Don't.

Mara lowered the key.

Then she turned and ran.

Behind her, the bell began to ring violently. The black flames went out, and the church shook as something enormous moved beneath the floor.

The creature screamed her name, not in her mother's voice, but in its own.

For the first time in centuries, the people of Blackwater heard it.

They heard the thing that had fed on their grief, fear, and love.

They heard it begging.

Mara reached the stairs as the lake began to rise. She climbed until she felt the night air, then stumbled onto the shore.

Behind her, the church tower sank beneath the water.

The bell rang once more.

Then the lake went silent.

By morning, the lake had turned clear. For the first time in generations, the villagers could see the bottom. There was no church, no tower, no staircase, only stones and the remains of a world that had existed beneath their feet.

Mara left Blackwater that afternoon.

She never heard her mother's voice again.
And she was nowhere to be seen again.

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 15 days ago (edited)

What an excellent story! It would be perfect to enter the Halloween scary story contest https://steemx.org/hive-107855/@ladyaryastark/halloween-story-contest-a-cold-blooded-october-week-2-i0i4j3. If you want to do it, just leave the link in the comments! 📝 🎃 🦇

 12 days ago 

It's a shame you didn't see the notification during week 2.

Week 3 of the contest is now underway, we hope you can participate, as your story was one of our favorites. But rules are rules, and we have to be fair to everyone!

So at this point i leave with nothing?

Its okayy then
I'm still bullish on this..
Stay jiggy🙂